A Love that Lasts

In these walls we met,
That time I won’t forget.
How you smiled and how you took
My breath away with just one look.
You smiled to me, and I smiled too,
It seems that I’ve fallen for you.
I know I just met you,
But it seems I’ve known you my whole life through.
I gazed into your eyes, and you gazed into mine,
You said you’ll be with me until the end of time.
You said that you’ll protect me for as long as we’re together,
How I wish that moment could last forever.

~alyz_28~ “o”


~ by agaw28 on July 29, 2008.

2 Responses to “A Love that Lasts”

  1. The poem is trying to tell us(if not fictional)an incident that occurred to Emo poet or someone he/she might know. An incident of a somewhat “love at first sight” moment/ destined moment happened. And that Emo poet is trying to express the said feeling you get in those “love at first sight”/ destined moments. i can say that this poem truly strikes the reader to appreciate those special if not meaningful moments.

  2. hmmm. nice.

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