Unsuspecting Moment

It was raining that day when we walked together,
And now the sound of raindrops make me remember,
How time stood still for that one moment,
How I realized what it meant.
I never really noticed how you felt for me,
Painful heartaches made me too blind to see.
That one moment somehow opened my eyes,
Got rid of my fears of heartbreak and lies.
You were the one I turned to when love wasn’t fair,
And that moment helped me see how much you truly cared.
I could trust you with my heart this much I knew,
Because I saw something different when I looked at you.
You could heal my heart and make it whole again,
And you always do even way back then.
I’m glad that moment was yours and mine,
That moment I saw true love for the first time…

~alyz_28~ “o”


~ by agaw28 on September 10, 2008.

4 Responses to “Unsuspecting Moment”

  1. “I’m glad that moment was yours and mine,
    That moment I saw true love for the first time…”

    i really like these two lines….

    Those lines are so cool

    for the first time

    it’s like you were trapped and couldn’t see love

    and then when that person came,

    you were free and could see love for the very first time




    nice one

    keep on writing yoh

  2. prehas kme ni edward, gs2 q dn ung 2 lines n un, chka gs2 q e2ng poem n 2, kc prng iba ung cnsb nia, iba s mga usual n love poems n gngwa m, =)

  3. haha! unga! i like this! haha πŸ™‚ lalo ndn un lines na sinabi ni edward haha! πŸ™‚ kc un ibng poems m puro heartbreak, buti nman dis tym, u found light! inspired k dn pla, msaya man o mlungkot! nice..hahaha πŸ™‚

  4. one of my faves dn e2! ksma nung “autumn loneliness”, πŸ˜€

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